Hello from St. Margaret Mary school in Omaha, Nebraska U.S.A. We are 32 3rd grade students from Mrs. Gilman's class. We studied the inventions of Thomas Alva Edison and Steve Jobs during the month of February. Then we came up with inventions of our own. Our story is written in a persuasive style like a commercial. We hope you like them!
Your inventions showed how creative you are and we were impressed with your original ideas! Below are the comments we posted on our class blog after having watched and discussed your inventions. :)
March 2, 2012
Dear 3rd grade Bunnies,
Thank you for your comments! We really enjoyed reading what you wrote about our inventions. You gave us some really good feedback on how to make our writing clearer. Have a great Friday.
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Dear 3rd grade class,
Your inventions showed how creative you are and we were impressed with your original ideas!
Below are the comments we posted on our class blog after having watched and discussed your inventions. :)
March 2, 2012
Dear 3rd grade Bunnies,
Thank you for your comments! We really enjoyed reading what you wrote about our inventions. You gave us some really
good feedback on how to make our writing clearer. Have a great Friday.
Mrs. Gilman and Room 113